Development notes

I unfortunately missed the feedback call for my first draft of my script which meant the feedback given was very little to go off. It was noted that my script lacked conflict and didn’t need a long start to it like I had wrote in my first draft. I personally am unsure what was wrong with the script not having conflict as it's set in a happy and positive tone which I had thought wasn’t necessity of need of conflict hence why I hadn’t included it. In future I would develop my skills in storytelling before attempting a first draft and include conflict when needed.

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